Nothing seemed the same

January 22, 2013
By DBrown896 BRONZE, Decatur, Illinois
DBrown896 BRONZE, Decatur, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Truth is, everyone's going to hurt you. You just gotta find the ones worth suffering for.


The moment I realized you were gone, I sat in deafening silence for what seemed like forever.
My mind was racing with discomforting thoughts, as my hands wiped away my streams of sorrow.
That night my dreams were invaded with all those memories of you and I.
The first time I seen your smile, the first time your lips met mine. The first time I felt like everything was ok.
I could never understand what went wrong, I played back the last time in my head over and over again.
Hoping I could recall the moment things changed, because from the moment, nothing seemed the same.


The author's comments:
This poem is written about my first true love ... Thigs went awfully wrong <3

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on Feb. 6 2014 at 10:57 pm
DBrown896 BRONZE, Decatur, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Truth is, everyone's going to hurt you. You just gotta find the ones worth suffering for.

Thank you!

on Feb. 4 2013 at 7:00 pm
DBrown896 BRONZE, Decatur, Illinois
4 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
Truth is, everyone's going to hurt you. You just gotta find the ones worth suffering for.

Thank you soo much!

WR1T3R GOLD said...
on Feb. 3 2013 at 9:48 pm
WR1T3R GOLD, Bloomfield, New Mexico
10 articles 2 photos 15 comments

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'Laziness comes from receiving rewards without the effort'

Oops I meant to write hear* :3

WR1T3R GOLD said...
on Feb. 3 2013 at 9:46 pm
WR1T3R GOLD, Bloomfield, New Mexico
10 articles 2 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
'Laziness comes from receiving rewards without the effort'

Wow I really loved it. I loved the visual on "streams of sorrow".  Keep writing I can't wait to here more. :) Please rate and/or comment on some of my work. Thnx

on Feb. 3 2013 at 9:24 pm
AnushLoveee17 GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
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sometimes you have to forget whats gone appreciate what still remains and look forward to whats coming next

great poem keep writing


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