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The sun sets over the horizon,
And I’m thinking of you.
The moon shines in the sky,
And I’m thinking of you.
The sea dances,
And I’m thinking of you.
Now that you’re gone;
The sun doesn’t set,
The moon doesn’t shine,
And the waves don’t dance,
But I’m still thinking of you.



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PadoodalleeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 31 at 10:21 pm:
Very beautiful. the simplicity really makes this poem stand out. Great Job!
 
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ThePHSMuseThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 31 at 3:27 pm:
If whoever reads this could please comment what they think about it, that would be great :)
 
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