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Invisible girl

invisible girl
that's me
no one can see me
invisible
is me
invisible girl
that's me
no one can hear me
invisible
is me
invisible girl
that's me
the ghost of darkness
invisible
is me
invisible girl
that's me
proud of it
invisible
is me
invisible girl
that's me
imbrasing it
invisible
is me



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The_Clock said...
Apr. 7 at 1:59 pm:
I feel as though you didn't need to repeat the words so many times, but other than that Nicely penned. =)
 
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Hamza Waseem said...
Mar. 31, 2013 at 4:43 am:
I felt the words re too repetitive, but the theme is good. so yeah. nice work!
 
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LariElaine said...
Mar. 31, 2013 at 4:03 am:
this one is probably one of my favourites, I really love it, it sorta describes me<3 added to favs
 
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EMarie This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 31, 2013 at 3:49 am:
I like this, but the flow seemed a little confusing. Maybe if you added a line between the stanzas it would help. But I like the content of your poem!
 
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