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she moves like the wind
stepping through forests
as if she were the wind
her long dark curls
swung down like cascades of silk
in the shadows of trees
she moves and glides
her bare feet barely touching the ground as she dances
graceful movements of beauty
dancing across the forest
wandering and roaming
trapped in a world of timeless beauty
and dances to the melodies of winds
touching her skin
the Dancer waltzes across the forest floor
spinning until the world falls and the sun engulfs the world
and the Dancer's eyes see gold
falling from the sun
the whispers of songs echoing in her head
her feet dancing forever
the timeless world
a Dancer's dream
floating away
with the faint sounds of music
softly blowing in time with the Dancer
into the distance
into the sun
away from the forest
the Dancer swirls
leaving all she knew behind
dancing away into the sunrise



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BehindSapphireEyes said...
Mar. 15, 2013 at 7:24 pm:
Enna, that was breathtakingly beautiful! You are quite the poet! The way you weave words together is impeccably enticing! 
 
EnnaGirl replied...
Mar. 15, 2013 at 7:28 pm :
thankyou so much!!
 
BehindSapphireEyes replied...
Mar. 16, 2013 at 3:28 pm :
You're ever so welcome, my dear! 
 
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AndsaymyLordincreasemeinKnowledgeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 8, 2013 at 7:02 am:
Wonderful!! I am left speechless.
 
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IrenieThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 1, 2013 at 12:19 am:
Beautiful! Reminds me of the wind :)
 
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AilsaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 19, 2013 at 9:06 pm:
this is so lovely i just want to sing it <3
 
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EnnaGirl said...
Feb. 13, 2013 at 7:48 pm:
thanks you guys!!!
 
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Laugh-it-OutThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 11, 2013 at 7:37 pm:
This was really good. I love the imagery, and the picture goes perfectly. Good Job!
 
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WhiteSwan13 said...
Feb. 3, 2013 at 9:01 pm:
Really good! :)
 
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Hamzawaseem said...
Jan. 30, 2013 at 11:46 pm:
Nice imagery. keep it up!
 
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