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Broken

God, I don't know if I can
take this anymore.

I'm trying, God, I really am,
it is you that I live for.

But I'm drowning in a sea of faces,
and names I'll never know.

I hate it here!
How can I call this place my home?

The kids at school,
they don't understand me.
They can't even see you, God.

But around them, I feel so inferior.
Am I the one who is truly odd?

God, just get me through today,
that's all I ask for now.

But in the long run,
I ask for peace.
Can you grant me peace somehow?

And God, please help them see you,
the same way that I do.

Help them know that in this changing world,
your love is always true.

This things that I pray for them,
I also pray for me.

God, please help me steady myself,
with roots deep like a tree.

Wrap me in your love again,
and let my soul dance with you.

Only you can fix me now,
and make my broken heart brand new.



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HazelGrace said...
Jun. 10, 2013 at 6:26 pm:
Personally, I do not believe in God, but this is an admirbaly passionate and well-written prayer. Nice job
 
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liberalartistThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 10, 2013 at 5:45 pm:
really nice work :3
 
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gossamergirlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 10, 2013 at 4:36 pm:
I love this poem :) keep it up :D
 
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SongBird04 said...
Jun. 9, 2013 at 12:42 am:
I love this one, too. It feels like your poems come straight from your heart, and they are so beautiful. Good job. :)
 
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LittleLadybird said...
Jun. 4, 2013 at 5:48 pm:
I agree completely with Jade! You are so brave and inspiring writing about your faith and its really encouraging for other people like me :) ur style of writing is so honest and beautiful, i love it!
 
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Jade.I.AmThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 4, 2013 at 5:45 pm:
This is really inspiring, I love how you can write about your faith. I hope you always stay strong in Him, and that your writing helps others as well. Thank you for the poem (:
 
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