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High Aim

December 29, 2012
By Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
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Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
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"The important thing is not to stop questioning." ~Einstein

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Like hawk, I want to fly,
And conquer the limitless sky,
It's no problem to aim high,
Let me give it a try!

© Jacob W., Oklahoma City, OK

The author's comments:
It suddenly came to my mind while I was writing an essay on "My Aim in Life" in my Creative Writing class.
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Mrinalinii said...
on Oct. 3 2013 at 7:09 am
this poem is really inspirational 'n' is very nicely written!
Jade.I.Am ELITE said...
on Apr. 24 2013 at 2:47 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1159 comments

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“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

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I like it...hey this reminds me of a poem I wrote "touch the sky" will u read it? It's 4 lines ;)
LivelyJade SILVER said...
on Apr. 14 2013 at 8:42 am
LivelyJade SILVER, Mtn. Grove, Missouri
9 articles 0 photos 40 comments

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The beautiful thing about writing is that you don't have to get it right the first time, unlike, say, a brain surgeon. ~Robert Cormier

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Very inspirational! I love it! :D
KayleneB BRONZE said...
on Apr. 4 2013 at 1:16 pm
KayleneB BRONZE, Oakfield, New York
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Short sweet and it took a landing right into my heart It was beautiful and completely true I love it (:
Fallen_ PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 1 2013 at 3:11 pm
Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
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I like it its nice :3
SunnyDreams BRONZE said...
on Mar. 24 2013 at 4:04 pm
SunnyDreams BRONZE, Niger Falls, Other
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nice way to keep it short but still got the message out  
Sabeen_Yameen SILVER said...
on Feb. 20 2013 at 2:59 am
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:)
fromtheashes GOLD said...
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(: you are quite talented. Never stop writing! <3
AnushLoveee17 GOLD said...
on Feb. 11 2013 at 4:17 pm
AnushLoveee17 GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
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NIce poem  i love the message in it  
EnnaGirl SILVER said...
on Jan. 30 2013 at 11:47 pm
EnnaGirl SILVER, Sacramento, California
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Short and sweet! 
loveshersheys said...
on Jan. 16 2013 at 11:16 am
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Short poem with a beautiful and a motivating meaning.
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This is very short and straight to the point! Yet, it is full of meaning! Love it :P
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i love the message in this
country-cutey GOLD said...
on Jan. 12 2013 at 12:08 pm
country-cutey GOLD, St.croix Falls, Wisconsin
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i love the ending good job
SiblingCoC BRONZE said...
on Jan. 10 2013 at 12:24 am
SiblingCoC BRONZE, Other City, Other
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Not as good as the others
LittleStormWriterGG SILVER said...
on Jan. 7 2013 at 12:14 pm
LittleStormWriterGG SILVER, Malvern, Iowa
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Smile, laugh, love. :)

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...Exactly how I've always felt.. but never have been able to do. ;)
MysticLady said...
on Jan. 6 2013 at 11:59 pm
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This is an energizing poem that makes me want to jump!
compassion GOLD said...
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Love the first and the last lines a lot :)
B.C.S. BRONZE said...
on Jan. 2 2013 at 3:50 pm
B.C.S. BRONZE, Doylestown, Pennsylvania
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short and sweet. good. 
SkylerMorningstar GOLD said...
on Dec. 31 2012 at 1:49 pm
SkylerMorningstar GOLD, Barrie, Other
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its nice :)