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High Aim

December 29, 2012
By Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
15 articles 1 photo 144 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The important thing is not to stop questioning." ~Einstein

Like hawk, I want to fly,
And conquer the limitless sky,
It's no problem to aim high,
Let me give it a try!

The author's comments:
It suddenly came to my mind while I was writing an essay on "My Aim in Life" in my Creative Writing class.

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Zoya_Khan GOLD said...
on Dec. 31 2012 at 12:41 pm
Zoya_Khan GOLD, Gujranwala, Other
19 articles 0 photos 420 comments

Favorite Quote:
Where LOGIC ends, FAITH begins.
- Zoya Khan

Nice :) :) :)

on Dec. 31 2012 at 12:17 pm
Silenced-Insanity SILVER, Moore, Oklahoma
9 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
When you acknowledge there is nothing repulsive or unforgivable or shameful about yourself, it becomes easier the be that authentic person and feel like you're living a less performed life.
-John Green

Short, but good (;

on Dec. 31 2012 at 2:30 am
Padfoot507 PLATINUM, Omaha, Nebraska
23 articles 2 photos 138 comments

Favorite Quote:
“It does not do to dwell on dreams and forget to live.”
-Albus Dumbledore

"I'm just a little bit caught in the middle,
Life is a maze, and love is a ridde."

As Songbird said, simple and short, but it gets a clear message across about your aspirations. Well done! But again, aim for more complex rhymes, or ones that aren't so commonly done. Good work! :)

SongBird04 said...
on Dec. 31 2012 at 1:31 am
SongBird04, Littleton, Colorado
0 articles 0 photos 89 comments

Favorite Quote:
You've gotta take the good with the bad, smile when you're sad, love what you got and remember what you had. Always forgive but never forget, learn from your mistakes but never regret. People change and things go wrong but always remember life goes on

Short and simple but I love it! :)

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