High Aim

December 29, 2012
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Like hawk, I want to fly,
And conquer the limitless sky,
It's no problem to aim high,
Let me give it a try!

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Mrinalinii said...
Oct. 3, 2013 at 7:09 am
this poem is really inspirational 'n' is very nicely written!
Jade.I.Am This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 24, 2013 at 2:47 pm
I like it...hey this reminds me of a poem I wrote "touch the sky" will u read it? It's 4 lines ;)
LivelyJade said...
Apr. 14, 2013 at 8:42 am
Very inspirational! I love it! :D
KayleneB said...
Apr. 4, 2013 at 1:16 pm
Short sweet and it took a landing right into my heart It was beautiful and completely true I love it (:
Fallenoutofgrace said...
Apr. 1, 2013 at 3:11 pm
I like it its nice :3
Sunny225LuvsHugs said...
Mar. 24, 2013 at 4:04 pm
nice way to keep it short but still got the message out  
Sabeen_Yameen said...
Feb. 20, 2013 at 2:59 am
in.this.moment said...
Feb. 15, 2013 at 12:36 am
(: you are quite talented. Never stop writing! <3
AnushAndMalachi said...
Feb. 11, 2013 at 4:17 pm
NIce poem  i love the message in it  
EnnaGirl said...
Jan. 30, 2013 at 11:47 pm
Short and sweet! 
loveshersheys said...
Jan. 16, 2013 at 11:16 am
Short poem with a beautiful and a motivating meaning.
baileyanne said...
Jan. 14, 2013 at 2:46 pm
This is very short and straight to the point! Yet, it is full of meaning! Love it :P
Kiry12 said...
Jan. 13, 2013 at 3:01 am
i love the message in this
country-cutey said...
Jan. 12, 2013 at 12:08 pm
i love the ending good job
DestroyedHeart said...
Jan. 10, 2013 at 12:24 am
Not as good as the others
GGLovesAPartner said...
Jan. 7, 2013 at 12:14 pm
...Exactly how I've always felt.. but never have been able to do. ;)
MysticLady said...
Jan. 6, 2013 at 11:59 pm
This is an energizing poem that makes me want to jump!
compassion said...
Jan. 3, 2013 at 10:13 am
Love the first and the last lines a lot :)
B.C.S. said...
Jan. 2, 2013 at 3:50 pm
short and sweet. good. 
SkylerMorningstar said...
Dec. 31, 2012 at 1:49 pm
its nice :)
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