High Aim

December 29, 2012
By Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
15 articles 1 photo 144 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The important thing is not to stop questioning." ~Einstein


Like hawk, I want to fly,
And conquer the limitless sky,
It's no problem to aim high,
Let me give it a try!


The author's comments:
It suddenly came to my mind while I was writing an essay on "My Aim in Life" in my Creative Writing class.

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Mrinalinii said...
on Oct. 3 2013 at 7:09 am
this poem is really inspirational 'n' is very nicely written!

on Apr. 24 2013 at 2:47 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1163 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

I like it...hey this reminds me of a poem I wrote "touch the sky" will u read it? It's 4 lines ;)

on Apr. 14 2013 at 8:42 am
LivelyJade SILVER, Mtn. Grove, Missouri
9 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
The beautiful thing about writing is that you don't have to get it right the first time, unlike, say, a brain surgeon. ~Robert Cormier

Very inspirational! I love it! :D

on Apr. 4 2013 at 1:16 pm
KayleneB BRONZE, Oakfield, New York
2 articles 4 photos 23 comments
Short sweet and it took a landing right into my heart It was beautiful and completely true I love it (:

on Apr. 1 2013 at 3:11 pm
Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
25 articles 3 photos 436 comments

Favorite Quote:
" a shattered world is only an opening into a new beginning with laughs, smiles, and love all around enter the world of the light and away from the broken darkness"

I like it its nice :3

on Mar. 24 2013 at 4:04 pm
SunnyDreams BRONZE, Niger Falls, Other
1 article 0 photos 274 comments

Favorite Quote:
Can you feel what I have seen, when no one else has lived through what I have?-HalveOfLife

nice way to keep it short but still got the message out  

on Feb. 20 2013 at 2:59 am
Sabeen_Yameen SILVER, Karachi, Other
9 articles 10 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you want something you have never had,
You have got to do something, You have never done!

:)

on Feb. 15 2013 at 12:36 am
fromtheashes GOLD, ~~~~~, Montana
14 articles 6 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I took the road less traveled, and that has made all the difference"~Robert Frost

(: you are quite talented. Never stop writing! <3

on Feb. 11 2013 at 4:17 pm
AnushLoveee17 GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
16 articles 2 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
sometimes you have to forget whats gone appreciate what still remains and look forward to whats coming next

NIce poem  i love the message in it  

on Jan. 30 2013 at 11:47 pm
EnnaGirl SILVER, Sacramento, California
9 articles 2 photos 58 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be the change you want to see in the world
- Ghandi

Short and sweet! 

on Jan. 16 2013 at 11:16 am
loveshersheys, Lahore, Other
0 articles 2 photos 30 comments
Short poem with a beautiful and a motivating meaning.

on Jan. 14 2013 at 2:46 pm
LyricLove SILVER, Webster City, Iowa
6 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't tell me the skies the limit when there are foot prints on the moon."

This is very short and straight to the point! Yet, it is full of meaning! Love it :P

on Jan. 13 2013 at 3:01 am
Miss_Brightside GOLD, Defiance, Ohio
16 articles 1 photo 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's like she sees the diamond underneath And she's polishin' you 'til you shine. -Brad Paisley. (this goes to my step mom she keeps me going)
If you want a rainbow you gotta put up with the rain.-Albert Einstein

i love the message in this

on Jan. 12 2013 at 12:08 pm
country-cutey GOLD, St.croix Falls, Wisconsin
10 articles 0 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dont say it if you dont mean it because i might actually belive it

i love the ending good job

on Jan. 10 2013 at 12:24 am
SiblingCoC BRONZE, Other City, Other
3 articles 0 photos 7 comments
Not as good as the others

on Jan. 7 2013 at 12:14 pm
LittleStormWriterGG SILVER, Malvern, Iowa
8 articles 0 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
Imagination is more important than knowledge. ~ Albert Einstein
Smile, laugh, love. :)

...Exactly how I've always felt.. but never have been able to do. ;)

MysticLady said...
on Jan. 6 2013 at 11:59 pm
MysticLady, Estancia, New Mexico
0 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your limit is what you make it

This is an energizing poem that makes me want to jump!

on Jan. 3 2013 at 10:13 am
compassion GOLD, Nowhere, Other
12 articles 17 photos 154 comments

Favorite Quote:
Expect to have hope rekindled,expect your prayers to be answered in wondrous ways! The dry seasons in life do not last,the spring rains will come again.

Love the first and the last lines a lot :)

B.C.S. BRONZE said...
on Jan. 2 2013 at 3:50 pm
B.C.S. BRONZE, Doylestown, Pennsylvania
2 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
“When someone says you've changed, it's only because you stopped living your life their way.”

short and sweet. good. 

on Dec. 31 2012 at 1:49 pm
SkylerMorningstar GOLD, Barrie, Other
13 articles 1 photo 47 comments
its nice :)


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