Boy Blue (a poem about coming out)

November 30, 2012
By Aramis_999 PLATINUM, Matthews, North Carolina
Aramis_999 PLATINUM, Matthews, North Carolina
25 articles 0 photos 54 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be strong, believe in freedom and in God, love yourself, understand your sexuality, have a sense of humor, don’t judge people by their religion, color or sexual habits, love life and your family. -Madonna


I'm trying not to be vulnerable,
They won't love me anymore...
I need to be strong-
Their "unconditional" love stopped- When I fell for a boy.
What a lie-

I don't like girl pink,
I never did-
I like boy on boy.
I like boy blue


The author's comments:
It was very hard to get this how I wanted it.

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on Dec. 13 2012 at 9:59 am
FearlessAngel GOLD, Bellevue, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
"Pain is just a simple compromise, so we can get what we want out of it."
~Paramore

Happy to help a fellow author! = P

on Dec. 12 2012 at 8:27 pm
Aramis_999 PLATINUM, Matthews, North Carolina
25 articles 0 photos 54 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be strong, believe in freedom and in God, love yourself, understand your sexuality, have a sense of humor, don’t judge people by their religion, color or sexual habits, love life and your family. -Madonna

Thank you so much for the complemient. When more of my stuff gets on this site it would mean a lot if you looked at it.

on Dec. 12 2012 at 10:46 am
FearlessAngel GOLD, Bellevue, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
"Pain is just a simple compromise, so we can get what we want out of it."
~Paramore

Wish I could believe that my parents would still be supportive if I told them I'm bi... Dad wouldn't look at me again. Mom would put me in a Private Christian school. T_T I admire your bravery. The poem itself is full of personality with the broken sentences and dashes. An enjoyable change from all the usual 4 line stanzas with perfect grammar.

on Dec. 11 2012 at 9:44 pm
Aramis_999 PLATINUM, Matthews, North Carolina
25 articles 0 photos 54 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be strong, believe in freedom and in God, love yourself, understand your sexuality, have a sense of humor, don’t judge people by their religion, color or sexual habits, love life and your family. -Madonna

Yep, true story.

on Dec. 11 2012 at 8:56 pm
FauxedTea BRONZE, Denver, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
'We all wear masks, and the time comes when we cannot remove them without removing some of our own skin.' -Andre Berthiaume

Full of heart, yet so simple. Very brave!

on Dec. 11 2012 at 11:02 am
MarieAntoinette2014 DIAMOND, Scottsburg, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Isn't it ironic? We ignore the ones who adore us, adore the ones who ignore us, love the ones who hurt us, and hurt the ones that love us.

It's very hard to come out about this, and one of my friends just came out yesterday. It can be a little scary but if your friends and family love you, they will stand by you...

on Dec. 11 2012 at 10:17 am
FearlessAngel GOLD, Bellevue, Nebraska
10 articles 0 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Pain is just a simple compromise, so we can get what we want out of it."
~Paramore

True story? You're so brave! Amazing lay out. Short, sweet and to the point.

on Dec. 10 2012 at 2:07 pm
Aramis_999 PLATINUM, Matthews, North Carolina
25 articles 0 photos 54 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be strong, believe in freedom and in God, love yourself, understand your sexuality, have a sense of humor, don’t judge people by their religion, color or sexual habits, love life and your family. -Madonna

Thank you so much. That means a lot to me :)

on Dec. 10 2012 at 2:02 pm
DarknessForever13 SILVER, Gainesville, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Quoth the Raven: "Nevermore!"
"What's right isn't always popular, but what's popular isn't always right." - Unknown

I loved the way you wrote this, its absolutely beautiful!! ^_^  


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