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Not asking for Love

December 4, 2012
By larissaecm SILVER, Victoria, Other
larissaecm SILVER, Victoria, Other
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The Stars have no compare to your eye's,
As a child's energy burst through you
For i am happy, too
The moon shines brightly above,
I might as well be in love,
So softly, your sound asleep,
So i don't say a peep, and take my leave.
Love is to strong for me,
So might as well not plea.


The author's comments:
What inspired me were the quotes i have taped on my wall

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HazelGrace said...
on Jun. 15 2013 at 11:56 pm
You are quite welcome :)

on Jun. 15 2013 at 12:39 pm
larissaecm SILVER, Victoria, Other
7 articles 0 photos 44 comments
Got it! Thank you sooo much I really like it when people ate honest because it means I can improve

HazelGrace said...
on Jun. 14 2013 at 11:30 pm
The lines themselves are nice but they all kind of seem random and unconnected. Write with purpose :) Take something you feel and do your best to convey it clearly and with beauty. 

Zach_M said...
on May. 4 2013 at 3:15 pm
Not bad!!! I love the last two lines.. great ending!!! :D

x_rbdf GOLD said...
on May. 4 2013 at 1:54 am
x_rbdf GOLD, Augusta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
He who faces give no light shall never become a star

Beautiful!!! I ecspect nothing lest then amazing from u in the future