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ARTIFICAL
November 15, 2012
COVER YOURSELF LESS GIRL.
RUN IN THE TALL RED PRADA HEELS YOUR
DADDY BOUGHT YOU,
JUST SO YOU CAN HIDE THE BLEMISHES
YOU FIND INSIDE.
UNRAVEL YOUR EMOTIONS,
JUST TO CONCEAL THEM WITH FOUNDATION.
© Danielle B., Cordydon, IA
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CorySchoonover BRONZE said...
on Nov. 28 2012 at 2:46 pm
I love the changes you made to this. It flows a lot better, and the word choice is better as well. I love it!
TraceBatWingsAndBrokenStrings DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 28 2012 at 2:45 pm
I adore the line ",just so you can hide the blemishes you find inside." Not only is it poetic because of the use of assonance, but the way it's said almost pokes fun at modern day girls in general. I love how this poem makes you think, while still captivating. Great job.
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