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COVER YOURSELF LESS GIRL.
RUN IN THE TALL RED PRADA HEELS YOUR
DADDY BOUGHT YOU,
JUST SO YOU CAN HIDE THE BLEMISHES
YOU FIND INSIDE.
UNRAVEL YOUR EMOTIONS,
JUST TO CONCEAL THEM WITH FOUNDATION.



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BreeChase This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 28, 2012 at 2:51 pm
Thank you guys! :-)
 
CorySchoonover said...
Nov. 28, 2012 at 2:46 pm
I love the changes you made to this. It flows a lot better, and the word choice is better as well. I love it!
 
TraceBatWingsAndBrokenStrings This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 28, 2012 at 2:45 pm
I adore the line ",just so you can hide the blemishes you find inside." Not only is it poetic because of the use of assonance, but the way it's said almost pokes fun at modern day girls in general. I love how this poem makes you think, while still captivating. Great job.
 
OneEye21 said...
Nov. 27, 2012 at 3:09 pm
Excellent. Really makes you think what we call beauty and what people think it is.
 
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