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Crazy Train

All the colors are fading.
Stuck in the ocean and drowning.
Wearing yesterday like a stain.
I seek God but have trouble finding.
Working on not being insane.
Despite the effort I gave.
I'm stuck on this crazy train.
And I just keep telling myself.
Stand in the rain.
Fight through the pain.
Try to stay sane.
Pray to God and hope to be saved.
Yesterday was bad but so is today.
Hopefully tomorrow won't be here to stay.




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OldYoungOneThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 26, 2012 at 6:07 pm:
I notice you have alot of metaphorical and symboilc techniques in your writing. It's very impressive how you go about using it.
 
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