What you are

October 24, 2012

Your eyes swirled like the ocean,
in a violent maelstrom.
The color was a deep, dark blue,
like lapis lazuli.
Your eyes seemed as if a
storm had been captured within.
Your stare was peering strongly,
beating on me relentlessly, like a drum.
Your eyes had a darkness within struggling to break free,
but they also seemed placid,
like the calm before the storm.

The author's comments:
I wrote this as an assignment for english and ended up really liking it.

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