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Flaming sparks residing in my skin
When their men arises -
blazing heat
Sleep tight, sleep quite; in deed
Giving away, a way, away
They dream inverted…in tense
Making flush and blush and red and pink
I Stand

…Bent to lean…
A tug of war
But;
In stead we push.



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taylorbugThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 5, 2012 at 6:31 pm:
This poem seems like a hodgepodge of words that actually fit really well together. I like it.         The last few lines are what really caught my eye. This is what I found. You're saying that usually in the game of tug of war, you pull. In this instance, you're pushing. That could mean anything from the fact that you may be a hipster to you trying to find yourself by trying new things. It could also mean that people have told you all your life tha... (more »)
 
nakoLa This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Dec. 6, 2012 at 5:27 pm :
See this is what i mean :D You got a totally different meaning, but its awesome Thank you Nice to meet you by the way xD
 
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