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October 25, 2012
By nakoLa PLATINUM, Springhill, Florida
nakoLa PLATINUM, Springhill, Florida
45 articles 2 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
It is not about waiting for the stom to pass.
Its about learning to dance in the rain.


Flaming sparks residing in my skin
When their men arises -
blazing heat
Sleep tight, sleep quite; in deed
Giving away, a way, away
They dream inverted…in tense
Making flush and blush and red and pink
I Stand

…Bent to lean…
A tug of war
But;
In stead we push.



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on Dec. 6 2012 at 5:27 pm
nakoLa PLATINUM, Springhill, Florida
45 articles 2 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
It is not about waiting for the stom to pass.
Its about learning to dance in the rain.

See this is what i mean :D You got a totally different meaning, but its awesome Thank you Nice to meet you by the way xD

on Dec. 5 2012 at 6:31 pm
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
72 articles 0 photos 860 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby." - Unknown

This poem seems like a hodgepodge of words that actually fit really well together. I like it.         The last few lines are what really caught my eye. This is what I found. You're saying that usually in the game of tug of war, you pull. In this instance, you're pushing. That could mean anything from the fact that you may be a hipster to you trying to find yourself by trying new things. It could also mean that people have told you all your life that you have to follow by the rules, but you decide to rebel anyway. Why not?   I really like this. Great job.


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