Chilling

October 4, 2012
By sadesdd DIAMOND, Elma, Iowa
sadesdd DIAMOND, Elma, Iowa
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The night breeze is chilling
It blows my hair around my face
Giving the night a magical effect
I feel refreshed
After the sticky hotness of the day
Looking out my open window
I see potential in all things
My imagination is running wild
I feel like sneaking outdoors
And staying there
Forever
Staking out in the leaves of a tree
Feeling peace as my eyes flutter shut
Believing


The author's comments:
One amazing summer night I was in my bed with the window wide open, writing, and this is what it made me feel.

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on Apr. 28 2013 at 8:52 pm
sadesdd DIAMOND, Elma, Iowa
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Thanks you so much for taking the time to comment on my poem! I was jumping up & down lol:) hope you can read more of mine! Thanks again

on Apr. 26 2013 at 4:45 pm
BrilliantInnocence SILVER, Edina, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
" I'm not perfect, I'm perfectly flawed," Amy Lee
“Heroes are ordinary people who make themselves extraordinary." -Gerard Way

I love this poem. Very well thought out, and descriptive. Good job!




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