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A sweet delicacy
Designed with great accuracy,
It’s efficacy to give ecstasy
Is filled in every inch of its intricacy.
Its deep brown hue,
Makes us go through a feeling that’s new.
The feeling that meets us very few.
It lights up a grey life with a smile,
Brings about exuberance for awhile.
You wish for it to never cease,
So that it may forever appease
Your palate, your senses.
You spot it, you pounce for it,
After all, what is food in its comparison?
Just a lump of nutrients, that too insipid.
You blend in with its intense nature,
You get lost in its depth.
So strong is its attraction,
So full is the satisfaction,
It gives,
One lives.
I write this down as I wait,
For it to arrive: my irresistible chocolate!




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coco7misty said...
Jun. 7, 2013 at 11:41 am:
beautiful. because who doesn't love chocolate?  
 
KanupriyaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 7, 2013 at 11:21 pm :
awww....thank you !!! Obviously, WHO DOESN'T?! ;)
 
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Zoya_KhanThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 11, 2013 at 7:28 am:
I LOVE CHOCOLATE...!!! Very different poem :)
 
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hypermagical said...
Nov. 2, 2012 at 5:36 pm:
After reading this, I need to go get me some chocolate!  Very good description, you place the reader in a psychological trance.
 
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compassionThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 5, 2012 at 7:13 am:
Now, what do i always think of you?  I think of you as a maven. You can be a maven at which ever you wish to be. Not every ones like that you see. Reading this poem i feel you are a maven at expressing senses with such fluency! Love the rhyming,the word choice. The way you limned the feel of it (the chocolate) is undeniably justified. Now can i have  a cadbury crackle? ;)
 
KanupriyaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Oct. 7, 2012 at 6:06 am :
aww thanks compassion! i  luv cadbury crackle!! i'll make it sure dat wen i go i'll get one fr ya too! :)
 
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Fallen_angel963 said...
Oct. 5, 2012 at 6:57 am:
great write.. now i want chocolate thou! C:
 
KanupriyaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Oct. 7, 2012 at 6:07 am :
thank u! lol :D
 
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