This poem has changed over time because I started it off with no periods or punctuation but discovered shifts and changes that can make it more affective. The decision that I made in the finally draft of the poem is I decided to create longer sentences and short sentences. It changed the poem speed and structure. The intended meaning of this poem is a girl heart was broken by a boy she trusted and she never forgave him until she died she never loved anyone as much as she loved him.
Could you be love
September 27, 2012