Save me?

September 27, 2012
I need someone
but no one is there
I need someone
but there is no one to trust
I need someone
to help me through
I need someone
to save me
Save me?
Save me??
Save me!
It's to late to be saved.

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RJW1997 said...
Oct. 1, 2012 at 10:46 pm
Someone at some point will same just keep faith and hope. And it will never be to late. Love the poem!
Photographywonder replied...
Oct. 2, 2012 at 9:05 am
Thanks so much :)
theshadowofanobody This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 30, 2012 at 4:39 pm
Hearts scream, an ear-splitting, earth-shattering, piercing scream...But why is it that no one can hear it?  Is it too late if I were to hear at last? If you need someone, I'll be there.  Even if I am but a stranger. You're in my thoughts. May your hopes, your dreams come true. You're an extraordinarily powerful writer. 
Photographywonder replied...
Sept. 30, 2012 at 5:16 pm
Thanks so much. And it's amazing, the trueness of what you said about hearts and their screams. Nobody can hear because they are deep inside of us, and most don't take the time to listen. Thank you for your kind words. 
Ruby-Paige-Rose said...
Sept. 30, 2012 at 10:21 am
Great poem. Just remember that it's never to late to be saved. Good luck on your future writing.
Photographywonder replied...
Sept. 30, 2012 at 5:16 pm
Thank you wery much
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