Blank Blue Eyes

August 27, 2012
By PeaceCanConquerAll BRONZE, Peace, Hawaii
PeaceCanConquerAll BRONZE, Peace, Hawaii
3 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I think everybody should like everybody." Andy Warhol


Tears collide as I frown
Glistening eyes, glassy and grey
Tears slide down my cheeks,
As my face fades away
I find myself, collapsing down
Happiness shines bright,
As the glare reflects in my eyes
I look away,
It is too much for my sadness to take
My mouth is gone,
My nose has melted away,
For all that's left
Are my eyes
And what they see
Is by-far too much to take
So again,
Like waterfalls
Salty teardrops fall and fall
As I see
A blurred, shaky
Image of a broken heart,
That lye in pieces ,
No longer together
Mascara and eye liner washed away
Blank blue eyes
Fade,
To grey
As sadness unfolds,
My heart has been ripped away



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on Aug. 13 2014 at 8:56 am
TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
22 articles 1 photo 439 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret" -Ambrose Bierce
" Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)"
"Don't go where the path leads you. Go instead where there's no path and leave a trail ;)"-R.W.Emerson

I like the detail use a lot, you pictured the scene very clearly. It was full of depth and emotions we all feel once in a while. That's why I can say that I relate to this easily. I like it how it was so poetic but still so simple ^_^ Keep up the great work, defenitly a 5 stars rating :D Thanks for sharing this.

on Aug. 6 2014 at 10:04 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1492 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

Very descriptive and full of emotion. A wonderful poem. Thank you for sharing this.

on Feb. 11 2014 at 10:23 pm
SunnyDreams BRONZE, Niger Falls, Other
1 article 0 photos 274 comments

Favorite Quote:
Can you feel what I have seen, when no one else has lived through what I have?-HalveOfLife

As I know, blue eyes do fade to grey, just like our moods, we have. I LOVE IT!




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