Why so Unfair?

August 24, 2012
By TanviKusum DIAMOND, Gurgaon, Other
TanviKusum DIAMOND, Gurgaon, Other
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Favorite Quote:
All men who have achieved great things have been great dreamers.
Orison Swett Marden

"The role of a writer is not to say what we all can say, but what we are unable to say." - Anais Nin

we speak in hushed voices so as to not wake our memories


I have been on google all day, and I still can’t find answers of what to say,
I know that when you go,
I’ll always know,
You’re smiling down my face,
Trying to brighten up my day.
Guess I will never know,
How difficult it was for you,
But I can feel the cancer eating me up day by day.
I lost my granny, I lost control,
I went berserk, cracked everything up,
But this I cannot handle,
It’s not about winning,
Not anymore,
I just plead now,
For somebody to listen,
God cannot be so unfair?
Its not for me to take decisions for the world,
Its not for me to understand the intricacies of the world,
In my dictionary, what you did is wrong, And I shall protest until my last breath,
Unless of course, you take it away.


The author's comments:
Poetry...after a long time.

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on Aug. 31 2012 at 5:44 am
TanviKusum DIAMOND, Gurgaon, Other
89 articles 4 photos 201 comments

Favorite Quote:
All men who have achieved great things have been great dreamers.
Orison Swett Marden

"The role of a writer is not to say what we all can say, but what we are unable to say." - Anais Nin

we speak in hushed voices so as to not wake our memories

Ah thank you so much. It means a lot to me. No, you weren't missing anything. I am not a poetry person and I kept writing what came to my mind..:) so yeah, free verse

on Aug. 28 2012 at 11:13 am
Kat_Poetry BRONZE, Neenah, Wisconsin
1 article 0 photos 61 comments

Favorite Quote:
"But without the dark, we would never see the stars"

I really like this. I know from personal expiereince how hard it is to loose someone to cancer and I think this really captures the anger you feel at the world after the person passes. I just have thing, its a little confusing that some lines rhyme and others don't. I found myself searching to see if I was missing some kind of rhyming scheme or pattern. Other then that, this was really good!


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