"Mr. Lamborghini" MAG

August 14, 2012
By lissa_ GOLD, Salt Lake City, Utah
lissa_ GOLD, Salt Lake City, Utah
16 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you don't stand for something you'll fall for anything."- Suckerpunch
"The purpose of life is to be a better version of yourself."- Lucy Hale


What about me?

You pass me like you roll a stop sign:
You know it's wrong,
But you do it anyway.
Well now we're on the freeway;
There's no slowin' down.
Can't you wrap your head around
That?
It's nothing profound.

Full speed ahead.
Spill it all out.
You screamed; you whined; you said.
You said everything,
And yet it's as if it was nothing.

But no, you're in a Lamborghini –
Special obligations to the whiney!
VIP access;
You confess:
“I'm the King –
Now stand up and sing.”
You're no big thing.

Sorry but it's not about how much
you got.
Your sports car is hardly a dot.
You're behind the wheel,
And that's what hinders her to seal the deal.

Buddy, sir, Mr. Lamborghini, I found some spare keys;
I will seize control –
'Cause what you got is nothing compared to what I do with it.



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lissa_ GOLD said...
on Jan. 22 2013 at 5:45 pm
lissa_ GOLD, Salt Lake City, Utah
16 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you don't stand for something you'll fall for anything."- Suckerpunch
"The purpose of life is to be a better version of yourself."- Lucy Hale

Thank you.(:

flanny SILVER said...
on Jan. 20 2013 at 2:23 pm
flanny SILVER, Madison, New Jersey
5 articles 0 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You must do the thing you think you cannot do." ~Eleanor Roosevelt

i really liked the last line, when she shows defiance against him and rebels against his superiority,

lissa_ GOLD said...
on Jan. 19 2013 at 5:48 pm
lissa_ GOLD, Salt Lake City, Utah
16 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you don't stand for something you'll fall for anything."- Suckerpunch
"The purpose of life is to be a better version of yourself."- Lucy Hale

Thank you so much!! You seem to have a deeper insight to the world of poetry.(: It took me a while to figure out your comment, but thanks! --indiewriter<3

lissa_ GOLD said...
on Jan. 19 2013 at 5:44 pm
lissa_ GOLD, Salt Lake City, Utah
16 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you don't stand for something you'll fall for anything."- Suckerpunch
"The purpose of life is to be a better version of yourself."- Lucy Hale

Thank you!(:

on Aug. 18 2012 at 3:53 pm
Ga-GahKayMarie GOLD, Patterson, California
14 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
If there is one word to describe life it is one

Love! No criticism to give sorry, Love the image its like a story i just read :) very nice!

on Aug. 16 2012 at 9:00 pm
Nguyenkhanh SILVER, Ho Chi Minh, Other
7 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
“I’m selfish, impatient and a little insecure. I make mistakes, I am out of control and at times hard to handle. But if you can’t handle me at my worst, then you sure as hell don’t deserve me at my best.”

This poem is very...joyful, i feel like a child looking at the other's vanity, but couldn't understand it. Aptly summing up your topics too. The flow of the poem itself spells carefree, utter truth and simplicity...this style, is also a pleasant contrast to my works. But unlike a reflective one, yours is an analogy, yours unplanned and perceptive. Good work- i do hope those things said are heard, that is all :) 

lissa_ GOLD said...
on Aug. 16 2012 at 12:19 pm
lissa_ GOLD, Salt Lake City, Utah
16 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you don't stand for something you'll fall for anything."- Suckerpunch
"The purpose of life is to be a better version of yourself."- Lucy Hale

Thanks!!!!(: Could you check out "Nude"? You'll see it under song lyrics on the most recently submitted section. I'll be sure to check out your poems too!!

on Aug. 15 2012 at 9:53 pm
thetruthawaits94 SILVER, Duncan, Oklahoma
9 articles 0 photos 353 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not about waiting for the storm to pass, but learning to dance in the rain.

WOW! I love this poem! It's really very very good. I think the title is just so perfect. It sets the mood for the whole poem. The flow of the poem was perfect! My favorite line is definitely the first one. It is so unique! The entire poem is so.. COOL. That is just how it reads! :) Congrats on Editor's Choice! It was certainly well deserved! Could you check out some of my works published on the site and critique them? Also, I've got a poem called "The Balcony" in the forums I would like you to read. You're a great writer and I would love for you to read my stuff! Again, Nice job!




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