August 9, 2012
I'M way over you
This is exacxly what you do
you can't prevent it
You can't deny it
Although you try, but you have to be yourself
And sometimes, I end up being the one on the shelf
Yes, I know I'm not the center of your universe
And for me it often times feels like a curse
You are being yourself, I'm trying to be me
I'm trying to flee and to be free
but you hold my heart unknowingly

I become more and more confused,
trying to hide the truth
It is an evident secret to everyone but you
and thank goodness, you would'nt find the proof
I pretend to be fell of hate
But, its love and it's slowly opening my metal gait
I tell myself your done, you've ruined it
But so suddenly, I'll fall, trip, slip
I start to speak to you
with a friendship type of voice
But you are exactly where my heart points
I love you, tenderly
but you, hold my heart; unknowingly

How can i prevent this?
I fight this raging battle but I know I'm going to miss
You can't control yourself;
displaying your own character
You don't know me, you harly notice me...
but you are my cure
So what do I do?
I'll continue to long for you
I'll remain to be in chains
And endure all these pains
Because I want you earnestly
And you, hold my heart...unknowingly.

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DanielM said...
Aug. 12, 2012 at 10:04 am
Great job!!!! I really like your message. I like your emotion
JesusFanatic replied...
Sept. 1, 2012 at 11:42 am
Thank you so much. i appreciate it. I loved writing this poem... lots of fun!!!!!
JesusFanatic said...
Aug. 11, 2012 at 11:03 pm
Thank you very much! I appreciate your feedback, nd I really love using repetition because I feel like it brings out the truly important parts of the poem. Thanks!
DedicatedDetermination said...
Aug. 11, 2012 at 10:59 pm
Wow, great job. The last line at the end of each stanza was brilliant, "and you hold my heart, unknowingly." I love how the narrarator struggles with the prospect of being in love with this person even though he can't escape it. Great work.
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