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The Man who stands on the Beach

August 8, 2012
By Awestruk BRONZE, Rogers, Arkansas
Awestruk BRONZE, Rogers, Arkansas
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It changes Daily :)


There is a man, who stands on the beach. He stands waiting, waiting in a thunderstorm. The rain pounds him, trying to break him. The waves wash and sweep him, trying to take him Away.

But the man, who stands waiting on the beach Has roots in his feet, roots deep deep down. His posture, impeccable- His energy inexhaustible. His mind razor sharp, never dull.

What could keep this man whole and sane? The Light at the end of the storm, The Peace that comes from tribulations, and troubles, The Hope that all ends well, and good, and just.

These things fuel his mind and his energy. These things and more. But why doesnt he move, move away from that shore? His long lost love roots him there. He will endure all troubles, face all fears, till he is broken, or till his sunshine comes out again.

~The man who stands on the beach in the storm


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This is a pick-me-up for everyone inspired by my best friend

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on Sep. 24 2012 at 10:04 am
Awestruk BRONZE, Rogers, Arkansas
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It changes Daily :)

Thank you for your comment :). Very glad you liked it!

on Sep. 11 2012 at 11:55 pm
WhiteStorme BRONZE, Roy, Washington
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I thought you did a great job. I love the first stanza the best. Really nicer job :)

on Aug. 22 2012 at 11:07 am
Awestruk BRONZE, Rogers, Arkansas
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It changes Daily :)

btw if you do like this plz comment, i enjoy them :) thanks!

on Aug. 16 2012 at 8:45 am
Awestruk BRONZE, Rogers, Arkansas
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It changes Daily :)

Yes :). Mainly about me and someone i know. But it also could be about someone else.   

on Aug. 16 2012 at 1:03 am
TelDorathan SILVER, Clifton, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
"I always come out fine, both physically and-"
Awkward silence...
"Uhh... Caboose?"
"Mentally!"

Is this about you, someone you know, or someone fictional?