August 6, 2012
Break up, then we pick up all the pieces.

We get stronger everyday, and overcome the weakness.

What’s love like? I’ve never been in.

The fear of losing her, and having to start all over again.

I don’t think I’m ready to give her my all, and all that trust.

But if your committed you have too, that s*** is a must.

hearts are closing as more legs start to open.

Can you fully love her with no words spoken?

Be the reason behind all those smiles.

Give her that feeling that she hasn’t felt in a while.

Respect and love everything she goes through,

your doing something right if she’s still with you.

Don’t lose love, its so hard to find.

Its hard to find love when they say love is blind.

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chamomile This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 10, 2012 at 1:50 pm
I've read all of your poems on here and your voice really stands out. I love it, honestly. Everything you say is very honest and direct, and this one impresses me the most with the way your thoughts flow. Once in a while there is a break in this flow, just be careful with words and syllables, it can really make a difference. The one point it really stick out in this poem was "The fear of losing her, and having to start all over again," it's very choppy, I would simplify it to &... (more »)
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