Tell me the truth

August 2, 2012
Tell me the truth.
You don't like what I write?
Okay,then tell me so.
You don't like who I am?
Okay,then tell me so.

You can say what you want about me.
Just don't think you can hurt me.
Tell me the truth that's all I want.
I've grown stronger.
Now,tell me the truth.

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everythingwillbeok_faith said...
Dec. 26, 2012 at 5:35 pm
amazing. I love the message that this poem conveys  
writergirl16 said...
Aug. 3, 2012 at 4:31 pm
That was really,really good. It got right to the point which was great. Hope to see more of your writing :)
artforthesoul99 said...
Aug. 3, 2012 at 9:37 am
I think that you got straight to the point and I like it. You are a very meaningful writer and person. I will Definitely be tuning in to read more !
Ballerina101 said...
Aug. 3, 2012 at 7:52 am
it is short but i like it, the length works in its favor so much.  just so you know... i think you are a wonderful writer. :)
Sidewinder This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 2, 2012 at 9:32 pm
It is short, but I think that it works in its favor. I like how it just straight-up tells you how you feel, rather than it using many irrelevent clutter words. Nice job.
uniqueman34 said...
Aug. 2, 2012 at 9:30 pm

 sooo true!!! this is awesome! :D


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