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Coming down

July 23, 2012
By Douglasscar GOLD, Louisville, Kentucky
Douglasscar GOLD, Louisville, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
Keep writing


lights cover the sky
as angels fly down
playing their harps
and singing their songs
their voices are pure
never missing a note
as they play their harp
and when they do so
the passage of time is blurred
when they come from the heavens


The author's comments:
Despite it mentions angels and the heavens doesn't necessarily mean its religious

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on Aug. 2 2012 at 7:01 pm
TraceBatWingsAndBrokenStrings DIAMOND, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"This gun has stopped time in its tracks, has altered the course of our fate. Destiny is shattered and timeless. Closed eyes feel the cold winds embrace."
-Avenged Sevenfold

Hmmmm..... not sure how I feel about this one. It's good, I'm just not sure that it's my type of writing. 

on Aug. 2 2012 at 4:38 pm
PurpOreos SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Keep smiling...Because life is a beautiful thing. And there is so much to smile about!
"Either write something worth reading or do something worth writing" Benjamin Franklin

Nice and the picture was like made for your poem. Godd job!