Anger why do you take over my body so? Why do you rush my veins and take all sense with it? Why do you make me scream out in frustration?! I am so sick of you! I need to change! Cause I can't change what's making me feel this may...
The last word of this poem was supposed to say "way..."
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dark_stars96i love this :) <3
Silver-wingedi love the fact that you wrote this when you were angry. You really brought the emotion to this poem. I can relate to what you're saying. Please don't forget to rate and comment on one of my poems.
blue_bunny_femalekeep writing hun cause ur really good dont give up on things you love to do cause one day you might become a writer
Lol I hope someday I become a published writer but ya never know what will happen :)
BlessingCursesNice! Love the picture. Fits well with this.....Hmmm see what awesome stuff you can come up when your going through the emtions :). Like this,Keep writting!!
Hbaffi really like this Hanna! It reminds me of one of my poems and i can totally feel the rage! good job!
chefgirlI love it. But I think the last word is way instead of may. Just checking. I love it. Love the length. Somehow it's a really good format. I like it untraditional. Great job!
CocosI could feel the anger you realsed in tis poem amd the picture only inhanced your words nice choice.
DedicatedDeterminationAmazing, I love how you decide to change yourself and leave the things that anger you alone because you know you can't change them. Beautiful poem.
Johnny99A great emotion. I can see the person just screaming all this out. I love the cliff-like ending.
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