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July 19, 2012
By Hannabug GOLD, Winona, Minnesota
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Anger why do you take over my body so? Why do you rush my veins and take all sense with it? Why do you make me scream out in frustration?! I am so sick of you! I need to change! Cause I can't change what's making me feel this may...

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Felt angry when I wrote this... So this is what I came up with...
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Johnny99 GOLD said...
on Jul. 29 2012 at 7:18 pm
Johnny99 GOLD, Newport News, Virginia
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A great emotion. I can see the person just screaming all this out. I love the cliff-like ending.
Hannabug GOLD said...
on Jul. 29 2012 at 6:37 pm
Hannabug GOLD, Winona, Minnesota
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Thanks :D :)
sumer44 GOLD said...
on Jul. 29 2012 at 6:33 pm
sumer44 GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
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Wow I love this poem. I like that's it's short and to the point. And I feel the emotion.
Hannabug GOLD said...
on Jul. 29 2012 at 1:17 am
Hannabug GOLD, Winona, Minnesota
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;D Like I said I use as few words as possible... I don't really have the attention span to write anything longer lol :D
TraceBatWingsAndBrokenStrings DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 29 2012 at 1:15 am
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The short, poignant style used is here is superb. I almost don't want to see a lengthier version of this because it's actually quite powerful on its own. It's shortness is its strength, in my opinion.
Hannabug GOLD said...
on Jul. 26 2012 at 7:33 pm
Hannabug GOLD, Winona, Minnesota
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ya i've been thinking about re-writing this poem but i was mad when i wrote this and its what i came up with....
DanielM SILVER said...
on Jul. 26 2012 at 7:31 pm
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
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Great poem. I really feel the tension in this poem. I like your last line. Awesome job!!!!suggestion: see if you can add more imagery
caitiekate GOLD said...
on Jul. 26 2012 at 2:00 pm
caitiekate GOLD, Hopkinton, New Hampshire
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i tend to write the ones that make you think....hahaha
Honour SILVER said...
on Jul. 26 2012 at 1:49 pm
Honour SILVER, New London, Connecticut
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I also like how it's structured, because like catie said you read it quickly and actually feel the emotion you're portraying, plus it's easy for me to understand.  Yay!!  A poem i don't have to read multiple time to get!! :D
Hannabug GOLD said...
on Jul. 26 2012 at 1:21 pm
Hannabug GOLD, Winona, Minnesota
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ya I was angry when I wrote this... I just wanted to write something to release my emotions :D
caitiekate GOLD said...
on Jul. 26 2012 at 1:19 pm
caitiekate GOLD, Hopkinton, New Hampshire
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i like the structure because it makes you read it quickly and you can feel the anger rising with the words. if you added more imagery and builded up the anger more...i think it would help this poem to be more intense (:
Dancergirl224 GOLD said...
on Jul. 25 2012 at 1:23 pm
Dancergirl224 GOLD, Allen, Texas
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It's good. I like this poem very much.
Rain. SILVER said...
on Jul. 24 2012 at 7:46 pm
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No worries, be happy. When I read this in my mind I heard an angry voice aha :P