The Way

July 12, 2012
By ShadowAngel2468 SILVER, Stroudsburg, Pennsylvania
ShadowAngel2468 SILVER, Stroudsburg, Pennsylvania
7 articles 3 photos 70 comments

The way you touch my face, early in the morning
The way you text me after I fall asleep and before I wake up
The way you hug me like I’m your oxygen, and your dying
The way you complement my crappy outfits & horrible hair
Maybe it’s the way
The way the corner of your lip twitches when you think
Or the way you hold my hand like I’m the fridge and you’re the magnet

Like I’m the thunder and you’re the lightning


Like your the PB and I’m the J



Like a lamp to a bulb
Without each other were useless
Because in fact, you see
It’s the way you’re my oxygen
My refrigerator
My lightning
Your smile

It’s the way you make me love you


The author's comments:
well this is about love, i may not be in it yet but i sure hope it feels something like this...

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. said...
on Oct. 6 2012 at 8:18 pm
^That's me. Mind checking out my work?:)

so_joy SILVER said...
on Jul. 29 2012 at 12:16 pm
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."

This is adorable! Good descriptions. Altogether great job.

Please read, rate, and comment on my poems! Thanks!


on Jul. 27 2012 at 2:29 am
ShadowAngel2468 SILVER, Stroudsburg, Pennsylvania
7 articles 3 photos 70 comments
thanks soo happy u liked it, i luv ur work

on Jul. 26 2012 at 7:50 am
TraceBatWingsAndBrokenStrings DIAMOND, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
52 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
"This gun has stopped time in its tracks, has altered the course of our fate. Destiny is shattered and timeless. Closed eyes feel the cold winds embrace."
-Avenged Sevenfold

Nice use of imagery. While I can't personally relate to this, I can understand the meaning. Great job.

on Jul. 18 2012 at 3:23 pm
ShadowAngel2468 SILVER, Stroudsburg, Pennsylvania
7 articles 3 photos 70 comments
thankyou, happy you enjoyed it!

on Jul. 17 2012 at 10:08 pm
Shahiro PLATINUM, Johnston, Iowa
20 articles 2 photos 262 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Soon we must all choose between what is right and what is easy." - Dumbledore (Goblet of Fire)

Sooooo sweet, and a beautiful thing to hope for

on Jul. 17 2012 at 3:28 am
ShadowAngel2468 SILVER, Stroudsburg, Pennsylvania
7 articles 3 photos 70 comments
awww thank you so much, im happy ppl can really feel this happy

on Jul. 16 2012 at 11:50 pm
somerandomperson GOLD, Millstadt, Illinois
11 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to destroy to be loved is to be destroyed~jace wayland
forever alone

i love this it ssoo sweet and i can relate

on Jul. 16 2012 at 6:15 pm
ShadowAngel2468 SILVER, Stroudsburg, Pennsylvania
7 articles 3 photos 70 comments
Thanx, i'll take it into consideration, appriceate the honesty :)

on Jul. 16 2012 at 6:14 pm
ShadowAngel2468 SILVER, Stroudsburg, Pennsylvania
7 articles 3 photos 70 comments
Thanx for noting that, im usually the grammer freak lol

on Jul. 16 2012 at 10:03 am
Wearing_Westwood GOLD, Cary, North Carolina
18 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't think. Thinking is the enemy of creativity. It's self conscious, and anything self-conscious is lousy. You can't try to do things. You simply must do things. -Ray Bradbury

I really liked this poem!  It was so sweet and cute

however, in line 7, you said "...like your dying"

it should be "like YOU'RE dying"

But other than that it was excellent!


This is me said...
on Jul. 15 2012 at 11:52 pm
I hope love feels like this too!

on Jul. 15 2012 at 11:40 pm
AlmostPublished GOLD, Phoenix, Arizona
11 articles 0 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live for today,because yesterday is gone and tomarrow may never come.

Love it, a classic. Honest, keep writing.

The whole magnet and fridge thing was soooo original but try to outnumber the old like pb and j. So that you have more of your creativity but still a sense of class.


on Jul. 15 2012 at 6:43 am
Madu_Bala BRONZE, Colombo, Other
4 articles 1 photo 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
To unpathed waters, undreamed shores - Shakespeare

What can be more tragic than to feel the boundlessness of the surrounding beauty and to be able to see in it its underlying mystery... and yet to be aware of your own inability to express these large feelings… Isaak Levitan

it's perfect. I like it. hey will u pls read & comment my work too?

on Jul. 15 2012 at 1:32 am
ShadowAngel2468 SILVER, Stroudsburg, Pennsylvania
7 articles 3 photos 70 comments

thank you, i have its still pending

 


on Jul. 15 2012 at 1:30 am
Dye-Hard-With-Passion SILVER, Houston, Texas
9 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"OMG, that's a big friggin duck"

I love it. Its good. You should right more.


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