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Fallen Angel

Stricken across a clouded sky,
I fall from the heavens with barely a sigh,
And fall to my loves arms below,
As my wings they spread, and carry me they try.
I fell in love and all it brought me was pain,
He cost me my soul and drove me insane,
As I thought of his love for me, God struck,
And sent me falling through the cold, harsh rain.
My glowing halo was ripped from my form,
and all through my mind lightning flashed like a storm,
I hope my mortal love was worth my eternal soul,
For now I walk the earth eternally with my essence transformed.



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redhairCat This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 25, 2013 at 4:05 pm:
I like the poem. :) Keep up the good work!
 
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XweienX said...
Jan. 16, 2013 at 6:32 pm:
A little grammatical error (and fall to my LOVERS arms below?) (as my wings spread, and carried me, they tried)

But I still enjoyed the poem, i love how there's a story to the poem and not merely a normal poem. Nice!
 
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Sparkle1popsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 11, 2013 at 6:28 pm:
You might want to swicth the part where you said, "As my wings they spread, and carry me they try." that was a bit of awkward wording. The rest was good though :)
 
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