Realize

July 6, 2012
You gave me your word,
And that meant more to me than anything in this world.
Don't you see?
You mean so much to me.
I sit and write about you all the time.
You're always on my mind.
It always brings tears to my eyes
Because this is nothing but a bunch of lies.
I put up with so much because of you.
I went through so much pain because of you.
When will this ever stop?
Do you really think you'll make it to the very top?
Open you eyes.
Please, it's time to realize...





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Dreamer7697 said...
Jul. 11, 2012 at 12:25 am
You just explained what I feel ..this is a amazing!!
 
SofiuhhMarie replied...
Jul. 27, 2012 at 3:19 pm
Please share it. (: 
 
EdgarAllenPoe said...
Jul. 10, 2012 at 11:12 pm
I love it not m kind of poem though only because Poe is more my thing but very nice dictation and clearity I could understand where your comming from where you have been you told me a story in less the 2 paragraphs props to you!
 
SofiuhhMarie replied...
Jul. 12, 2012 at 9:03 pm
Thank you! :D
 
DanielM said...
Jul. 10, 2012 at 10:52 pm
This is a great message. I really like the part about don't you realize I write about you. Great poem. Suggestion: what is the meaning of this poem. I would aslo add a hook in the beginning.
 
SofiuhhMarie replied...
Jul. 10, 2012 at 10:59 pm
My poem is directed to someone who means so much to me. I meant to leave the reader hanging.
 
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