Realize

July 6, 2012
By SofiuhhMarie GOLD, Stockton, California
SofiuhhMarie GOLD, Stockton, California
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You gave me your word,
And that meant more to me than anything in this world.
Don't you see?
You mean so much to me.
I sit and write about you all the time.
You're always on my mind.
It always brings tears to my eyes
Because this is nothing but a bunch of lies.
I put up with so much because of you.
I went through so much pain because of you.
When will this ever stop?
Do you really think you'll make it to the very top?
Open you eyes.
Please, it's time to realize...



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on Jul. 27 2012 at 3:19 pm
SofiuhhMarie GOLD, Stockton, California
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Please share it. (: 

on Jul. 12 2012 at 9:03 pm
SofiuhhMarie GOLD, Stockton, California
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Thank you! :D

on Jul. 11 2012 at 12:25 am
InfinityandBeyond01 BRONZE, N/a, California
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Favorite Quote:
Stay Strong! <3

You just explained what I feel ..this is a amazing!!

on Jul. 10 2012 at 11:12 pm
Santiagopeoms PLATINUM, Bay St. Louis, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
Nevermore...- Edgar Allen Poe

I love it not m kind of poem though only because Poe is more my thing but very nice dictation and clearity I could understand where your comming from where you have been you told me a story in less the 2 paragraphs props to you!

on Jul. 10 2012 at 10:59 pm
SofiuhhMarie GOLD, Stockton, California
12 articles 0 photos 9 comments
My poem is directed to someone who means so much to me. I meant to leave the reader hanging.

DanielM SILVER said...
on Jul. 10 2012 at 10:52 pm
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"I would rather hated million times for what i did then loved a million times for what i didn't do." - Daniel Moto
" I've sought out to be the best i could posibly be but when i hit a roadblock in life what did i do, i had two choices either stay at the roadblock or i take this roadblock and make of it and go around it and achieve my goal. So, what will it be?"- Daniel Mathia

"People take love like its a four letter word or just a phrase that you tell people or your friends all the time. But in reality love is much bigger than a merely phrase or 4 letter word. Instead love is a genuine promise or covenant to that special person."-Daniel Mathia

“Why change yourself when you were made perfect and wonderfully by the creator of everything?” – Daniel Mathia

“If live is not hurtin then were really not living in.” – B. Reith

This is a great message. I really like the part about don't you realize I write about you. Great poem. Suggestion: what is the meaning of this poem. I would aslo add a hook in the beginning.




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