Real Me?

June 25, 2012
By Pandora202 GOLD, Gainseville, Georgia
Pandora202 GOLD, Gainseville, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
I live to die so bite me ;P


This isn't me.
This person who lies and pretends to be something she is not,
This girl who hides behind the lies that she created,
This child who acts strong when she wants to cry.
I keep her locked up and tell no one of her existence.
Can i never escape the excruciatingly cruel torment of myself?
How can one fight and free themselves from who they are?
This isn't me.
This person who hides behind the mask of deceit,
This girl who is trapped within a storm of mixed emotions,
This child who stays hidden behind who i pretend to be.
How can anyone know me if even i know not of my true self?
Can no one tell me who i am?
Can no one find the key to unlock me,and free the real me?



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DanielM SILVER said...
on Jul. 2 2012 at 10:01 am
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"I would rather hated million times for what i did then loved a million times for what i didn't do." - Daniel Moto
" I've sought out to be the best i could posibly be but when i hit a roadblock in life what did i do, i had two choices either stay at the roadblock or i take this roadblock and make of it and go around it and achieve my goal. So, what will it be?"- Daniel Mathia

"People take love like its a four letter word or just a phrase that you tell people or your friends all the time. But in reality love is much bigger than a merely phrase or 4 letter word. Instead love is a genuine promise or covenant to that special person."-Daniel Mathia

“Why change yourself when you were made perfect and wonderfully by the creator of everything?” – Daniel Mathia

“If live is not hurtin then were really not living in.” – B. Reith

Okay Primy I see you. This poem was really good. I really like your messages. Its funny how we naturally hide ourself from people. Great emotions. Suggestion: maybe you should end with a hook. But other than that Great Job Primy.




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