Oh Skies-Graceful Portrayer

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Oh Skies ,bright and elegant;
how thou instill serenity and hope in this quivered mind,
lined by infinity,smothered with delightful moods.
Thou stand high,
drawing a path to effervescence.

Oh Skies disquiet and dread,
lighting and thundering,
down pouring, letting it flow from your bosom.

Oh Skies mystic and ecstatic,
opulent with perspicacity:
shining with the shine conceived through every season that thou pass.

Oh Skies of wonders, how thou portray this soul so absolute.

Oh Skies painted with a tint of pink thither,
smeared with orange hither,brushed with red far and wide;
how beautifully thou recapture the memories.





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Miss_Orange said...
Jun. 18, 2014 at 10:25 am
Hi, compassion! here's my constructive and honest comment: I really like this but maybe you could use something else for the opening of the verses aside from Oh, skies. I just think it's a little repetitive but it's alright as it is.
 
augustsummerfling This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 25, 2013 at 7:27 am
This was very beautiful!!! There was this time that I was travelling on flight n then we were passing into the day sky from the night sky... I felt soemthing like this!! wonderful poem!
 
-QUEENCOURT-neyElaine said...
Jul. 23, 2012 at 1:41 am
The poem is truly beautiful but i had to use a dictionary to know the meaning of some of them words... eah i'm dumb :p 
 
Lovegoes2HATE said...
Jul. 22, 2012 at 4:08 am
it was beautiful i hope this makes it
 
ShadowAngel2468 said...
Jul. 12, 2012 at 11:38 pm
that was so beautiful and well written and fantastic
 
Aeliss-Novak said...
Jul. 12, 2012 at 11:37 pm
I love it! And I don't even like poetry...
 
walternash3 said...
Jul. 11, 2012 at 9:00 am
this is really nice :)
 
Ballerina101 said...
Jul. 11, 2012 at 8:48 am
beautiful wording and i love the raw emotions. Great job!
 
Muzee3 said...
Jul. 7, 2012 at 12:35 pm
Beautiful wordings and full of raw emotions! Class! Keep it up!
 
mary_blue356 said...
Jun. 28, 2012 at 8:30 am
So classical! Classical styles usually portray more emotion and they usually reach the audience. Yes, I like this. :D Keep it up!
 
BlackTalonMC said...
Jun. 28, 2012 at 8:20 am
Very well written.  Some of those words are hard to make work, and make them work well, especially at the teenage level, well done.
 
earthhashope said...
Jun. 28, 2012 at 7:44 am
Just the poem for a cloudy day!! Its beautiful!!!!!!!!
 
hypermagical said...
Jun. 26, 2012 at 4:44 am
I've never seen the words "hither" and "thou" used so well by a teen! Nice :)
 
KanupriyaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 24, 2012 at 2:16 am
u have raptured my senses really.....this poem is like u can read it every day.....without boredom... and take in the blissful words jotted down by ur magical hands.... :)
 
ACreativeMess said...
Jun. 24, 2012 at 1:46 am
Amazing, you really have a talent! I hope to read more of your stuff in the future!!
 
AyeshaLiveLaughLove said...
Jun. 24, 2012 at 1:43 am
My jaw just dropped! An absolutely outstanding piece. You have captured the true beauty of simplicity in this amazing piece. Great work! 
 
Black_Rose_Princess said...
Jun. 24, 2012 at 1:40 am
Beautifully written! The details were very vivid and I could easily imagine everything. I really loved your word choice. Amazing job!
 
zendaya replied...
Sept. 28, 2012 at 10:10 am
i love this one so powerful and yet so simple i love it
 
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