April 28, 2012
By Anonymous

I feel alone...detached from the rest of the world.
Im helpless and blind, theres no hope for me.
My heart has shatterd into a million peices.
I can't seem to find the light at the end of the tunnel, and I stumble around in darkness.
My life has been torn apart.
Everything I loved or ever wanted has been destroyed.
Thrown away.
I'm alive but then im not.
I don't know what to do, my soul restless.
Everything is in a haze, almost like im walking through an endless maze.
The depression deepens and I slowly slip away into the depths of greif and pain.
I feel this is the end.
A sharp pain in my throat, and I struggle for air...but there is none.
Depression swallows me.
And I'm gone...

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on Jun. 15 2012 at 8:16 pm
The-Silent-Call BRONZE, Cincinnati, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
\"Trust yourself, you know more than you think\" -Spock

If you're going through this right now, I'm so sorry, I really hope you find your light at the end of the tunnel, your hope in the night. I know what you mean, being swallowed by a kind of despair that won't let go.


In terms of the poem, I feel its a little disorganized, though it helps to convey the feelings a bit, but it could help to tweak it a bit to make it easier to read.


Also, there are a few spelling errors, but you know, those are fized quickly. So girl, I hope you find you light, and keep fighting!

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