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Dancing with the Falling Leaves

A sweet little fairy
Sat high atop the trees
Dancing and whirling
Among the falling leaves.
Clothed in brown skirts
Spotted with yellow and red,
She sat amongst golden glittered leaves
Swirling 'round her as she said:
"Lovely, lovely are the leaves
That come tumbling down.
But even lovelier is the one
Who makes the leaves whirl 'round!
Who made the leaves' colors
Brown, yellow, orange, and red?"
I peered up at her smiling face
And grinned back as I said:
"The one who created you
And me and this and that
Thought up all these wonderful creations
Like flowers and trees and cats!"
Five years later, I thought of the day
And smiled at the memory
Of the sweet little fairy who played and
Danced with the falling leaves.



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vazenitran98 said...
Jun. 10, 2012 at 7:15 am
Nice poem. Full of nature and I love nature. I hope you write more with that creative mind of yours. Check out my work too,If you don't mind and have enough time. This poem is a great way to start off the summer. :)
 
BekahBekah replied...
Jun. 10, 2012 at 7:18 am

Oh, thank you! :)) I'm currently working on this book, actually. :) I might post it on TeenInk if I ever finish it! :) 

I'll definitely check out your work :) THanks again!

 
The-Silent-Call said...
Jun. 9, 2012 at 11:08 am
Awww, this is such a cute poem! I also like the rhythm of it and the rhyme! Great job!
 
BekahBekah replied...
Jun. 9, 2012 at 8:11 pm
Thank you so much! :D 
 
mrittmritt77 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jun. 11, 2012 at 5:22 pm
i like the rhythm and idea :) could you check out some of my stuff?
 
BekahBekah replied...
Jun. 11, 2012 at 9:05 pm
Thank you! :) I definitely will. :D
 
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