dead love </3

June 5, 2012
By VampireCupkake BRONZE, Mc, North Carolina
VampireCupkake BRONZE, Mc, North Carolina
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It kills me,
To not know.
What you do,
When you wont talk to me.
Do you know,
Know how it makes me feel?
I feel dead.
Dead inside,
And unwanted.
I feel like I'm not good enough.
Because of you.
I loved you, I hated you.
Now I feel nothing for you...

The author's comments:
Im going thru a really bad time with my boyfriend and this is what happened. Me writing words on paper....

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on Jun. 8 2012 at 2:27 pm
Apollo77 PLATINUM, Brunswick, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"All you have to do is write one true sentence. Write the truest sentence that you know.”
"Madame, all stories, if continued far enough, end in death, and he is no true-story teller who would keep that from you."
-Ernest Hemingway

It is dead and also full of emotion, that's so cool! wait, no, not cool...but the poem's cool...:)


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