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Perfectly Imperfect

You know the feeling,
That you have to be perfect.
Perfect Hair,
Perfect Body,
Perfect friends,
Perfect life,
Perfect everything.

I have none of these things.
My hair never stays in place.
I have a lot of curves,
My friends are not perfect.
My life is a mess.
But I like to consider people like me as,
Perfectly Imperfect.

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Alixchica66 said...
May 18, 2012 at 10:40 pm
hey, this is a very true poem :) as some feedback, try to structure it in a more poetic way instead of just stating things :P but overall, i liked it. keep progressing!
Paige_Marie replied...
May 22, 2012 at 8:22 am
Thank you for the advice... I will keep it in mind when I'm writing ;)
PeNfReAk10This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 18, 2012 at 6:34 pm
cool. AWESOME. 
Paige_Marie replied...
May 22, 2012 at 8:23 am
thank you =D
tigers said...
May 15, 2012 at 10:11 pm
It sounds great! I have some poems from English too, so please take a look and tell me what you think:)
tigers said...
May 15, 2012 at 10:05 pm
this is  a great poem
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