Perfectly Imperfect

May 14, 2012
By Lonley_Flame SILVER, Clymer, Pennsylvania
Lonley_Flame SILVER, Clymer, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"'I love you' is eight letters... So is 'Bullshit'" ;)


You know the feeling,
That you have to be perfect.
Perfect Hair,
Perfect Body,
Perfect friends,
Perfect life,
Perfect everything.

I have none of these things.
My hair never stays in place.
I have a lot of curves,
My friends are not perfect.
My life is a mess.
But I like to consider people like me as,
Perfectly Imperfect.


The author's comments:
This was actually the first poem I wrote for my English assignment xD I was isnpired by my best friend, Veronica. (we are almost exactly the same =D) and I think my cousin came up with the title. =) hope you enjoy..

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on May. 22 2012 at 8:23 am
Lonley_Flame SILVER, Clymer, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"'I love you' is eight letters... So is 'Bullshit'" ;)

thank you =D

on May. 22 2012 at 8:22 am
Lonley_Flame SILVER, Clymer, Pennsylvania
7 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"'I love you' is eight letters... So is 'Bullshit'" ;)

Thank you for the advice... I will keep it in mind when I'm writing ;)

on May. 18 2012 at 10:40 pm
Alixchica66 SILVER, Vicksburg, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Oh, so you have enemies? Good, that means you've stood up for something you believe in." -Marshall Mathers

hey, this is a very true poem :) as some feedback, try to structure it in a more poetic way instead of just stating things :P but overall, i liked it. keep progressing!

on May. 18 2012 at 6:34 pm
PeNfReAk10 PLATINUM, Chino Hills, California
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Favorite Quote:
When life hands you lemons, take the seeds and plant them.

cool. AWESOME. 

tigers said...
on May. 15 2012 at 10:11 pm
tigers, Arvada, Colorado
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It sounds great! I have some poems from English too, so please take a look and tell me what you think:)

tigers said...
on May. 15 2012 at 10:05 pm
tigers, Arvada, Colorado
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this is  a great poem


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