Tradgedy's Desire

April 20, 2012
By Skullblood BRONZE, Not Telling :P, Michigan
Skullblood BRONZE, Not Telling :P, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Nevermore" said the Raven.~ By Edgar Allen Poe

Pain surrounds me, swirling and choking me
It blinds my already stinging eyes
Hiding what I already can barely see
Through the thick fog of grief and sorrow
It is hiding what love and happiness tries to save me
People love me, trying to save me from hate
People hate me, trying to knock me down
But I won’t let them, life is to glorious to give away
I will savor it, seeing the things that will befall me
In later life, I will love and find the one
I will find my true friend, the trusting one
Pain will flitter away in the cool breeze,
Calming my torn and broken heart
A glass heart beats in me,
Fragile, but loved.
For pain is now, but love comes soon
And then my happy ending befalls me.

The author's comments:
This poem was inspired by my severe depression last year, and how I clung to life on hope that it would get better.

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This article has 3 comments.

on May. 21 2012 at 6:43 pm
SaritaFajita BRONZE, Arlington, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
- In your anger do not sin.
Psalm 4:4

- "Love the life you live, live the life you love." -bob marley.

One word: Amazing. 

It's something teens can relate , since so many go through depression. Love it, and glad to see you've recovered from your depression. 

- Write on & express yourself. #YOLO

on May. 14 2012 at 7:59 pm
the3rdkind GOLD, Santo Domingo, Other
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Favorite Quote:
One day you are seventeen and planning for someday. And then quietly, without you ever really noticing, someday is today. And that someday is yesterday. And this is your life. - Nathan Scott (OTH)

I adore this! Amazing word choice. Could have made the ending stronger, put the overall was strong!

on May. 14 2012 at 7:32 pm
kandiheart SILVER, Knoxville, Tennessee
5 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You're everything that I want but you don't want me." Adam Lambert

I like this poem. It has a lot of deeper meaning that I really want to explore! It's interesting and makes readers think

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