A Voiceless Tear Shed

May 3, 2012
By RisingMoon BRONZE, Skokie, Illinois
RisingMoon BRONZE, Skokie, Illinois
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I can tell you don't believe me
The way your eyes, they sway obliquely
Seas upon a milky earth
Drenched in pain drawn from heart's hearth
Quenched with flame and ravaged with thirst
Admit this isn't what you deserve.

Walk
Stalk
Talk with me
Beneath moonblanket, I'll set you free
Your fear will the night sky raze,
Your eyes bleed blue, but your soul's ablaze.

It radiates a hazy taste
Upon my anxious tongue it laces
Passion,
Some sort of twisted fashion
Of love
A friend's
Everlasting.

You threaten death
And yeah, you might,
Regardless
It'll be alright.



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DanielM SILVER said...
on May. 16 2012 at 6:45 pm
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"I would rather hated million times for what i did then loved a million times for what i didn't do." - Daniel Moto
" I've sought out to be the best i could posibly be but when i hit a roadblock in life what did i do, i had two choices either stay at the roadblock or i take this roadblock and make of it and go around it and achieve my goal. So, what will it be?"- Daniel Mathia

"People take love like its a four letter word or just a phrase that you tell people or your friends all the time. But in reality love is much bigger than a merely phrase or 4 letter word. Instead love is a genuine promise or covenant to that special person."-Daniel Mathia

“Why change yourself when you were made perfect and wonderfully by the creator of everything?” – Daniel Mathia

“If live is not hurtin then were really not living in.” – B. Reith

First of i liked your poem it was has good detials and good imagery.

The only thing i suggest is their was one part where you were like "Your fear....but it i think you meant You not Your.

Anyhow that was an awesome poem i liked your title and message. Great job!!!


dudeness said...
on May. 7 2012 at 7:52 pm
Wow, so deep. Really beautiful. Tell me more...


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