I Believe

April 29, 2012
By Morgana1 GOLD, N/A, North Carolina
Morgana1 GOLD, N/A, North Carolina
10 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Live so that when you come to die, even the undertaker is sorry" -Mark Twain


You think it’s done, it’s all gone.
That the sun has left,
But the day’s just dawned.
Feeling helpless,
like you’ll never succeed.
But I know better
And I believe.

You think it's over, you’re finished off.
You tossed and turned,
This one you lost.
But I know better,
And I can see.
That you aren’t broken,
And I believe.

You fought your battles,
But still you fall,
The more you do,
You lost it all.
But you know better,
You just can’t see,
The good potential,
And I believe

The lullabies,
Can’t help you now.
You want to cry,
You want out.
You need a hand,
To pull you up,
You’re drowning now,
You’re always stuck.

But I know better,
And I believe,
In all the beauty,
In you I see.
You may not see the good,
But it’s still there.
Think of my lullabies,
‘Cause you’re still here.


The author's comments:
I'm hoping some one will read this and realize they aren't small or helpless. They should know that there's a person in the world who does believe that they can do anything.

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on Jul. 26 2013 at 5:27 pm
GreekGoddess BRONZE, Andover, Connecticut
3 articles 0 photos 182 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'm not superstitious, I believe in irony.
~Me

This was very very good, you really got your message out there. I was a little put off by the structure of the poem. You started the poem with every stanza ending with "And I believe", but the last two didn't which got me a little distracted. I also thik it should have ended with "And I believe" or "I believe (in you)". This was a very good poem, great job! I very much enjoyed reading it :)

on Jul. 28 2012 at 1:54 pm
IqraImran123 BRONZE, Gillingham, Other
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i liked it x

 


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on May. 20 2012 at 10:31 am
I'm really glad you like it :). Thanks for the feedback!!!

on May. 20 2012 at 10:20 am
KayliLovesYou PLATINUM, Lincoln, Nebraska
25 articles 0 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont cry because it is over smile because it happened

i love it its just so powerful it reminds me of what my bestfriend always tells me everyday :)

Morgana1 GOLD said...
on May. 12 2012 at 8:42 pm
Morgana1 GOLD, N/A, North Carolina
10 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Live so that when you come to die, even the undertaker is sorry" -Mark Twain

Please rate, all feedback will help me to do better :)

Morgana1 GOLD said...
on May. 12 2012 at 7:43 pm
Morgana1 GOLD, N/A, North Carolina
10 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Live so that when you come to die, even the undertaker is sorry" -Mark Twain

You didn't have to read it twice, but it means a lot that you did. Thank you!!

Morgana1 GOLD said...
on May. 12 2012 at 7:43 pm
Morgana1 GOLD, N/A, North Carolina
10 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Live so that when you come to die, even the undertaker is sorry" -Mark Twain

Gosh, 50 people have read this????? That's more than I could've hoped for! Thanks for everyone who read!!!! And please, don't be afraid to leave comments!!

Morgana1 GOLD said...
on May. 12 2012 at 7:40 pm
Morgana1 GOLD, N/A, North Carolina
10 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Live so that when you come to die, even the undertaker is sorry" -Mark Twain

Thank you guys soo much!!!! You are awesome :)!!!

on May. 12 2012 at 10:38 am
alex_kiteflyer BRONZE, Darwin, Other
1 article 0 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You can either be a cop or a criminal, but when you're facing a loaded gun what's the difference?"

awesome tessy. loved it :)

DanielM SILVER said...
on May. 11 2012 at 9:50 pm
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
6 articles 1 photo 247 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I would rather hated million times for what i did then loved a million times for what i didn't do." - Daniel Moto
" I've sought out to be the best i could posibly be but when i hit a roadblock in life what did i do, i had two choices either stay at the roadblock or i take this roadblock and make of it and go around it and achieve my goal. So, what will it be?"- Daniel Mathia

"People take love like its a four letter word or just a phrase that you tell people or your friends all the time. But in reality love is much bigger than a merely phrase or 4 letter word. Instead love is a genuine promise or covenant to that special person."-Daniel Mathia

“Why change yourself when you were made perfect and wonderfully by the creator of everything?” – Daniel Mathia

“If live is not hurtin then were really not living in.” – B. Reith

After reading it a second time. It still was awesome and intersting....

DanielM SILVER said...
on May. 8 2012 at 7:47 pm
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
6 articles 1 photo 247 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I would rather hated million times for what i did then loved a million times for what i didn't do." - Daniel Moto
" I've sought out to be the best i could posibly be but when i hit a roadblock in life what did i do, i had two choices either stay at the roadblock or i take this roadblock and make of it and go around it and achieve my goal. So, what will it be?"- Daniel Mathia

"People take love like its a four letter word or just a phrase that you tell people or your friends all the time. But in reality love is much bigger than a merely phrase or 4 letter word. Instead love is a genuine promise or covenant to that special person."-Daniel Mathia

“Why change yourself when you were made perfect and wonderfully by the creator of everything?” – Daniel Mathia

“If live is not hurtin then were really not living in.” – B. Reith

Awesome Poem. Great Message. I really liked your begginning stanzas.


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