Dear Mr. Teacher

April 25, 2012
By Marethyu GOLD, Columbus, Ohio
Marethyu GOLD, Columbus, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
“No man's knowledge here can go beyond his experience.” - John Locke


Dear Mr. Teacher, congratulations.
The war is now over and you have won.
My spirits are crushed while yours are the same.
My heart is now gone while yours remains.
My life almost over from constant pain.
My suffering and hate fuels the rage.
You said I was a jerk, and disrespectful too.
That leaves me to ask, what about you?
You went into my mind and moved everything around.
You split me into two, now I’m not sure of what to do.
What is right and what is wrong I cannot choose because of you.
The two sides of me are good and bad.
One is false while the other is true.
But now I cannot pick because of you.
My life is now over all thanks to you.
The ending will be grave because of you.
So long Mr. Teacher, and congratulations.
The war is no over and you have won.
My life is now over.
So long and farewell.
My ending is coming so goodbye to you.
The memories of me shall fade too.
You say bright I say dark.
You say happy I say sad.
You say good I say bad.
You say love I say hate.


The author's comments:
Is is something I wrote to help myself just get rid of some depression that I faced after my experience which a teacher (which I have wrote a lot about because of the huge impact he had on me).

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on May. 2 2012 at 8:00 pm
deleted, Miami, Florida
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Sounds like really rough situation, but I can somewhat agree with this in one way or another. I really like it, it's intense and honest. Not sure exactly what happened, but sorry you had such a bad experience!

Marethyu GOLD said...
on Apr. 27 2012 at 9:04 pm
Marethyu GOLD, Columbus, Ohio
11 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
“No man's knowledge here can go beyond his experience.” - John Locke

Thank you. He is probably considered the nicest teacher by every other in the student. I think I am the only student who has had a negative experience with him and like I said this has had a really awful effect on me. I have another article about what happened between us.

on Apr. 27 2012 at 6:37 pm
madlinejoy SILVER, Deale, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
let go and let God
"Love is not an emotion but a choice"

wow sounds like a realy mean teacher but the poems great!!


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