The Pressure

April 21, 2012
By PurpOreos SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
PurpOreos SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
7 articles 0 photos 136 comments

Favorite Quote:
Keep smiling...Because life is a beautiful thing. And there is so much to smile about!
"Either write something worth reading or do something worth writing" Benjamin Franklin


I don't know what to do
This concerning you
You've been such a fool
Which is not cool
You need to be banned
You should have just ran
Instead you decided to stay
And ended up getting played
By your peers
Now your crying tears


The author's comments:
This was the first poem I wrote, this poem was for a Poetry book assignment at school. And at the time I disliked poetry.But now I really like it. This is one of my favorite poems.

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on Mar. 2 2013 at 8:41 pm
Sparkle1pops PLATINUM, Colorado Springs, Colorado
31 articles 20 photos 343 comments

Favorite Quote:
"No great artist ever sees things as they really are. If he did, he would cease to be an artist."
- Oscar Wilde

Hey! I really like this since it was your first this is great! I also started poetry at school and hated it, but I grew to love it and foun TI by chance :) I am so glad I did!

on Feb. 24 2013 at 5:30 pm
vaidaspade10 BRONZE, Davenport, Washington
4 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
"No matter what they say behind your back, they're at a loss because you've locked the knife drawer. Forgiving them now will just leave your back sore." -Qiana Casch

Really liked this.! I rated it a 5 star. Read some of my stuff sometime! :)

LunaLives GOLD said...
on Nov. 30 2012 at 8:30 pm
LunaLives GOLD, South Bend, Indiana
17 articles 0 photos 237 comments

Favorite Quote:
Because I can!-Me "Life is a choice and death is a decision"-Lil Wayne

Great message. I wish I had read this a long time ago. It would have saved me a lot of grief.

on Jun. 5 2012 at 6:51 pm
PurpOreos SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
7 articles 0 photos 136 comments

Favorite Quote:
Keep smiling...Because life is a beautiful thing. And there is so much to smile about!
"Either write something worth reading or do something worth writing" Benjamin Franklin

Thanks :)

 


on Jun. 5 2012 at 6:44 pm
AngelaAxelson GOLD, Littleton, Colorado
12 articles 11 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Every day, think as you wake up, today I am fortunate to be alive, I have a precious human life, I am not going to waste it. I am going to use all my energies to develop myself, to expand my heart out to others; to achieve enlightenment for the benefit of all beings. I am going to have kind thoughts towards others, I am not going to get angry or think badly about others. I am going to benefit others as much as I can.”


― Dalai Lama XIV

Wow nice! 5 stars for sure, it has such point! The only suggestion would be changing a couple word choices and it would be 6 stars!

on May. 5 2012 at 12:16 pm
PurpOreos SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
7 articles 0 photos 136 comments

Favorite Quote:
Keep smiling...Because life is a beautiful thing. And there is so much to smile about!
"Either write something worth reading or do something worth writing" Benjamin Franklin

Thanks so much!!

DanielM. said...
on May. 5 2012 at 11:56 am
Awesome Message!!! Great Job!! i really liked the first sentence it caught my eye.


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