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The Pressure

I don't know what to do
This concerning you
You've been such a fool
Which is not cool
You need to be banned
You should have just ran
Instead you decided to stay
And ended up getting played
By your peers
Now your crying tears




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Sparkle1popsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 2, 2013 at 8:41 pm:
Hey! I really like this since it was your first this is great! I also started poetry at school and hated it, but I grew to love it and foun TI by chance :) I am so glad I did!
 
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vaidaspade10 said...
Feb. 24, 2013 at 5:30 pm:
Really liked this.! I rated it a 5 star. Read some of my stuff sometime! :)
 
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LunaLives said...
Nov. 30, 2012 at 8:30 pm:
Great message. I wish I had read this a long time ago. It would have saved me a lot of grief.
 
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NatureWriterThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 5, 2012 at 6:44 pm:
Wow nice! 5 stars for sure, it has such point! The only suggestion would be changing a couple word choices and it would be 6 stars!
 
Meka100 replied...
Jun. 5, 2012 at 6:51 pm :

Thanks :)

 

 
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DanielM. said...
May 5, 2012 at 11:56 am:
Awesome Message!!! Great Job!! i really liked the first sentence it caught my eye.
 
Meka100 replied...
May 5, 2012 at 12:16 pm :
Thanks so much!!
 
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