A Mothers Sacrifice

April 12, 2012
By Anonymous

My mother makes the biggest sacrifice of all. She puts me and my siblings first. When she pick up a new pair of pants for herself looks at them and says “my children are more important then myself “. My mother sacrifices to keep clothes on our backs. My mother is my hero she teaches me right from wrong. Giving me money for the movies in stead buying her buying her cigarettes. She comforts me when im feeling down. She drops everything she doing to comfort me when im hurt.

To me that’s the biggest sacrifice

That’s my mother makes.

The author's comments:
i wrote this poem for my mother she did a lot of sacrificing in her life i i seen that my whole life.

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This article has 2 comments.

LunaLives GOLD said...
on Apr. 15 2012 at 11:43 am
LunaLives GOLD, South Bend, Indiana
17 articles 0 photos 237 comments

Favorite Quote:
Because I can!-Me "Life is a choice and death is a decision"-Lil Wayne

You made alot of mistakes but you do have potential. If you go back and maybe edit it. Perhaps put a rythem and fix some mistakes it could be a whole lot better.

on Apr. 14 2012 at 5:06 pm
AllysonMarie GOLD, Gardner, Massachusetts
12 articles 25 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Only an Aunt can give hugs like a mother, can keep secrets like a sister, and share love like a friend.”

Im sorry for the critism, but it was more of a statment or story. And their a repeted Line. But great job.! (:


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