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Life is 
Like a piece of 
Bubble gum
At the beginning 
it is sweet
and has
Flavor
But at times 
It has no flavor 
And becomes bitter.




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IAmWhoIWantToBeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 19, 2012 at 12:15 am:
You might like to revise this. It's straight to the point but maybe you could use a little deeper words and take your time choosing your words. This might be a great poem if you revise it...
 
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