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The Evergreen Pines

March 23, 2012
By JackieBloom BRONZE, Canton, Ohio
JackieBloom BRONZE, Canton, Ohio
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The pines are ever green and silent.
They fill my nose with freshness, sharpening my every sense.
They are beautiful, majestic, peace and world silence.
They block out the world, giving me time to breathe
And it's only when I'm breathing that I'm truly living.
The sun barely shines through their branches,
It's heat doesn't reach me here.
All is cool and silent beneath the pines. Will you stay with me, dear?


The author's comments:
I'm an avid reader but a new writer. I've just started to experiment with poetry and would greatly appreciate any comments, criticism, and writing tips.

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