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GOD, set me free!

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I want to be free.
I want to be free.
I want to be free.

I keep wishing for the same thing.
I keep wanting the same thing.
I'm reaching for it.
Racing after it.

I NEED IT!
What will it take to be free?

I am time's captive.
Held prisoner and unable to escape.
So I drop to my knees and pray the same prayer.
"GOD set me FREE, please."

And I wait......




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Hannabug said...
Sept. 30, 2012 at 1:08 pm:
I will be praying for you....
 
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Live-Free-Or-DieThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 1, 2012 at 12:43 pm:
This is good, it shows emotion, it shows your thoughts, and does a good job at it.  Good job, Krystal, and may GOD blass and protect you through your life!
 
Live-Free-Or-DieThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 1, 2012 at 12:49 pm :
I meant, 'GOD bless and protect you...' sorry about the misspelling.
 
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KrystalT said...
Apr. 15, 2012 at 11:28 am:
Please rate and comment and I'll rate and comment on your work too. I'm trying out different styles of writing and would really appreciate any constructive criticism.
 
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