GOD, set me free!

April 1, 2012
By LunaLives GOLD, South Bend, Indiana
LunaLives GOLD, South Bend, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Because I can!-Me "Life is a choice and death is a decision"-Lil Wayne


I want to be free.
I want to be free.
I want to be free.

I keep wishing for the same thing.
I keep wanting the same thing.
I'm reaching for it.
Racing after it.

I NEED IT!
What will it take to be free?

I am time's captive.
Held prisoner and unable to escape.
So I drop to my knees and pray the same prayer.
"GOD set me FREE, please."

And I wait......


The author's comments:
I've been through foster care, group homes, treatment centers, safe places, and bounced around the family for years and feel like I can't get out because time is not on my side.

SUNDAY, APRIL 1st, 2012 @11:36 A.M.

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Hannabug GOLD said...
on Sep. 30 2012 at 1:08 pm
Hannabug GOLD, Winona, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't only practice your art, but force your way into its secrets, for it and knowledge can raise men to the Divine." Ludwig van Beethoven

I will be praying for you....

Honour SILVER said...
on Sep. 1 2012 at 12:49 pm
Honour SILVER, New London, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
Greater love has no man than this, that a man lay down his life for his friends. ~John 15:13

"Give me liberty or give me death!" ~Patrick Henry

Be brave and steadfast; have no fear or dread of them, for it is the Lord, your God, who marches with you; he will never fail you or forsake you. ~ Deuteronomy 31:6

"I prefer dangerous freedom over peaceful slavery" ~ Thomas Jefferson

I meant, 'GOD bless and protect you...' sorry about the misspelling.

Honour SILVER said...
on Sep. 1 2012 at 12:43 pm
Honour SILVER, New London, Connecticut
9 articles 0 photos 181 comments

Favorite Quote:
Greater love has no man than this, that a man lay down his life for his friends. ~John 15:13

"Give me liberty or give me death!" ~Patrick Henry

Be brave and steadfast; have no fear or dread of them, for it is the Lord, your God, who marches with you; he will never fail you or forsake you. ~ Deuteronomy 31:6

"I prefer dangerous freedom over peaceful slavery" ~ Thomas Jefferson

This is good, it shows emotion, it shows your thoughts, and does a good job at it.  Good job, Krystal, and may GOD blass and protect you through your life!

LunaLives GOLD said...
on Apr. 15 2012 at 11:28 am
LunaLives GOLD, South Bend, Indiana
17 articles 0 photos 237 comments

Favorite Quote:
Because I can!-Me "Life is a choice and death is a decision"-Lil Wayne

Please rate and comment and I'll rate and comment on your work too. I'm trying out different styles of writing and would really appreciate any constructive criticism.


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