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You, My Love

March 22, 2012
By snowlove999 GOLD, Sheperdsville, Kentucky
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"for three to keep a secret two have to be dead" - Thomas Jefferson
"i have great faith in fools, self confidence my friends call it.." - edgar allen poe

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Monsoons were no match for the feeling you invoke
Turret waves crash over me consume me
Into this feeling
Which I cannot say
is one so wrong

But I can say
It envelopes me
Into a world I have known
For so long but never really saw
With a clear light

You bring about
A feeling I never wish to let go of
But instead
Keep forever

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cruz-hil000 said...
on Apr. 9 2012 at 11:06 am
cruz-hil000, Vancouver, Washington
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great poem! this poem had so much feeling to it.  it reaminded me of how dreams make me feel and you explained it exactly to the point