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A Plea

When we first met,
I didn't even want to be friends.
You seemed like the weird type,
Or the douchey type.
I could have never guessed what you would really turn out to be.

We started talking more,
Then, finally, you asked for my number,
I was hesitant at first,
Not really wanting to,
But after a few days I gave in.

We texted for awhile,
Always had the best of times,
Never regretted a thing.

We later fell madly in love,
Everything was perfect,
I wouldn't have changed a thing.
Life like that forever,
Was a complete fantasy to me..

Then things started changing,
We both acted differently,
Not willing to listen to each other,
Not willing to talk to the other.

All I wanna know is why?
I thought we both said forever,
I thought we both could pull it through,
Listen calmly,
But now it's all up to you.

I'm willing to listen,
I'm willing to go back to how i was,
If you'd tell me what changed at least.
But I can't make you do a thing, so it's all up to you.

I want to go back,
I want to be the same,
Be in heaven again.
But it's all up to you.

All I can say is I love you,
I don't know if you feel the same.
But I do,
That's all I know,
That's all I will ever know.

Just, let's both take a second look,
Listen better,
And try.





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AgentOrange789 said...
Apr. 16, 2012 at 5:45 pm
In internet language, seems legit. :D I like how it really feels like your own experience, and it feels like exactly how you would tell it. Well done. 
 
maeugeniap said...
Apr. 13, 2012 at 7:28 am
Man, you are an artist! I <3 it! 
 
Midnight_Starsong said...
Apr. 12, 2012 at 4:14 pm
great work keep writin
 
AirRae said...
Apr. 10, 2012 at 9:23 pm
great job. totally relatable, and nicely structured.
 
DreamsOfGold said...
Apr. 10, 2012 at 8:07 pm
I cannot exactly explain how much I love this piece. It has all kinds of emotions rolled into one; it has the feeling that you know who you are. That feeling will bring you up, but, personally, I already think that you're one of the top that there are. Keep going strong, and you'll see how far you can go.
 
Moonlight1234 said...
Mar. 28, 2012 at 2:25 pm

this is amazing i love it :)

 

 
98jazzy98 said...
Mar. 27, 2012 at 10:42 pm
It's really good! I enjoyed reading it, and figuring out the true meaning of the poem, and what it meant to me personally. (= Great Job!
 
BringMeTheHorizon018 said...
Mar. 27, 2012 at 10:30 pm
I love this, really good work
 
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