Happy me

March 23, 2012
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I am happy because of you
You are happy because of me
You love the stars
I love the sun
You are tough
I am sweet
That is why we are
Meant to be

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Boobear98 said...
Jun. 12, 2012 at 3:06 pm
I think that this is a very unique piece. You should stay and say what you want and how you feel. I hope I see many more of these pieces because I feel you writing them because you put your emotion into them instead of any one else's. Don't be a bum at home write about a bum. Stand up for rights sit down and write. Thank you soooo much for showing me what kinds of writings there are in different peoples mind. Rember keeeeeep writing. Hope you will be famous one day. I say Write On don't Sit Down... (more »)
rebeckabear replied...
Jun. 12, 2012 at 3:11 pm
Thank you soooooomuch
Silver-winged said...
Jun. 9, 2012 at 11:47 pm

your poem is

too general

you should explain deeper in every line.

Express your feelings even more.


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