Happy me

March 23, 2012
By rebeckabear BRONZE, Escondido, California
rebeckabear BRONZE, Escondido, California
3 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
live life to the fullest


I am happy because of you
You are happy because of me
You love the stars
I love the sun
You are tough
I am sweet
That is why we are
Meant to be


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on Jun. 12 2012 at 3:11 pm
rebeckabear BRONZE, Escondido, California
3 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
live life to the fullest

Thank you soooooomuch

Boobear98 said...
on Jun. 12 2012 at 3:06 pm
I think that this is a very unique piece. You should stay and say what you want and how you feel. I hope I see many more of these pieces because I feel you writing them because you put your emotion into them instead of any one else's. Don't be a bum at home write about a bum. Stand up for rights sit down and write. Thank you soooo much for showing me what kinds of writings there are in different peoples mind. Rember keeeeeep writing. Hope you will be famous one day. I say Write On don't Sit Down. And Don't Be A Bum!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

on Jun. 9 2012 at 11:47 pm
Under-the-Rain GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
18 articles 5 photos 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
Are you ready to go to battle with your mind?- Written by me :)
Lost the battle, win the war//Bringing my sinking ship back to the shore- Paramore, Now

your poem is

too general

you should explain deeper in every line.

Express your feelings even more.

 





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