A Thorn and a Black Rose Bud

March 24, 2012
Oh victim of other's dark sins
In the softest whisper you weep
Close your tired eyes, a new day begins
Give it time, the sun shall rise as you sleep
Before you write another somber rhyme
Watch the new day come in a crimson sunrise
Give it time, oh wait for the dawn of new time
Let light fall upon your restful face, open your eyes

The sun has yet to fall from grace
Do not let those drops of ink
Rain like tears down your face
Don't let them make your spirits sink
When they painfully cascade,
Those evil sinning tears,
Leaving ink stains that will not fade
Wiped away again and again all these years

You stand in the moonlight's beam
Only the moon, not the sun, makes you
A stark silhouette with tears unseen
That pour not in light but dark in lieu
With each knife-edged word you write
Cuts a gash that pours not blood
But that gushes night
A thorn, and a black rose bud

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SuNshiNe007 said...
Mar. 27, 2012 at 7:34 am
Wow! This is Amazing!! Your friend did an outstanding job! And I agree with your comment. I love the last part!
LilZo11 replied...
Mar. 27, 2012 at 12:55 pm
i kinda wrote it about you because i was reading some of your work and it all seemed really sad so i wrote about how sad your writing is haha, i hope you don't mind being the subject
SuNshiNe007 replied...
Mar. 28, 2012 at 7:46 am
Wow, really? I have never had anyone do that before. I believe for the first time you have made me speechless, not many people can do that. Haha.. And no, I dont mind being the subject.
LilZo11 replied...
Mar. 29, 2012 at 2:22 pm
yay!!! hah glad i made you speechless :) and im so glad you dont mind, i like writing about other people, it's easier, i mean less pain than about myself, its meant to be an encouraging piece for you to tell you that things will get better for you
SuNshiNe007 replied...
Mar. 30, 2012 at 7:58 am
Awe how sweet! And thats awsome you like writing about other people:) Thanks so much!
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